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one chance...

one chance...

one chance...
 in this hard to believe world
   lost in the grasp of your hands

one chance...
 in this contemporary moment
   dark and nowhere to go

i know...
 i can't be perfect
   done lots of mistakes

i know...
 there can be no compromise
   cause i had done a lot of times

i know...
 there can be no more excuses
   for i had them in all of my senses

one chance...
 if you could just extend another one
   to make me prove that i was wrong

one chance...
 if there could only be another one
   i'll make amends and prove you now

one chance...
 give it to me and let me show
   that there was you i only owe

this one chance.

Author notes

chances are not always given at will...
Written June 18th, 2005

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  • jxd gap
    June 20, 2005
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    i thought of someone who could be my mentor.. thanks for the time you spend for me.. i like your work so much.. i just can't read all of them this fast.. thanks.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 19, 2005
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    Very well written, I love the depth to this piece as well. It makes the mind flow with it. Great job Gypsy