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Heal

Ever since I cried these tears
I never noticed
That every tear that fell
Would fill in the cracks
of my broken heart

A new light surrounds me
The wind flowing through my soul
The fire burning in my eyes.
I'm whole once again.

It's easy to break things
but putting them back together the right way
was the hard part.
I sing my poem to people who had doubts.

The cure my friends?
Is for something you must find out on your own.
If you feel like letting go just remember.
There is hope.

And if no one else cares for you
I will.

Author notes

I guess you could say this poem is kind of happy. Well it's more happy then my others.
Written June 18th, 2005

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  • angelfruitcake
    June 27, 2005
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    omg that is so good. Where do you get your inspiration from? Well keep up the good work ok. Hey visit my site and read my poetry and comment thatnk you. ..