You caress me
Sending liquid sunshine
Coursing through my veins.
Fingertips flow
Subtle strokes
Molding mounds
And filling hollows.
You take me
Higher.
Send me
Deeper.
Breathless
I am forever changed.
Shooting stars ignite
burning your essence
into my soul.
Patricia Gibson-Williams
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Written June 18th, 2005
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A contest entry
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300 points, ended June 26, 2005, 38 entries
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This was a very very very beautifully written poem. It appealed to my sences with each word. Good word choice was used! Keep up the great work!
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o.o Very erotic, but sensual. The second and third stanza are the most... lewd, but the rest is just... seemingly more loving?
Eh... what do I know. Interesting write though... I don't think I could ever write about this subject.
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Nice passionate poem.
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excellent
what I liked in this piece is that it has some spritual aura in it....great write...simple yet deep... -
A very short an sweet poem, very erotic to, well done , keep on writing.
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A very sensual poem of passion and love.Thanx for writing.
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Yummy.
So sensual.
I love the line about liquid sunshine. Such a compact poem, and yet it brings up so much feeling. -
Not to much words but you said so much. I can feel all of your feelings, and that is the best in this poem. Just keep writing. I think you have something special inside what must go out, like this poem.
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Passionate & Wonderful
Wow, this was short but yet it was sweet pure love! Well Done with this beautiful poem! Keep it up! Good Luck on the contest!
God Bless!
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