It sucks how life can be,
it changes so quickly,
not knowing the real truth,
or anything in life.
You think you got it made,
until it starts to fade,
then you know it's all fake,
and it is all over.
Life is just like some dreams,
no matter how it seems,
the ending is just bad,
even if it starts good.
One day life may change,
maybe it will be strange,
or it may just be good,
or it may never change.
LIFE MAY STAY THE SAME OR MAYBE IT WILL CHANGE BUT ALL I KNOW...
LIFE REALLY REALLY SUCKS RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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My b/f and I just broke up and I feel so freaking stupid. I feel that life sucks bad. The only thing good about it is that God is always around and watching. Even if it is bad now...when we all die, we will be happy for those who believe and trust. 
~~*~~Sadie ~~*~~
Written June 18th, 2005
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Ooohhh. My heart goes out to you on this one. I used to feel the same way. Lucky for me, I walked into the right job at the right time and found my perfect world. I married him after that and continued with my job. My life turned around. I didn't let anyone stop me from getting the good things in life that I so desired. That was 8 years ago. Today I am still that happy person feeling like I am on top of the world. I hope this for you. Keep your chin up, I strongly beleive that good things come to those who wait. And even better things to people like you who so deserve it. Keep up the excellent writing. I loved the way it made me feel. It made me remember how I felt and could relate to what you were saying. It also makes me thank everyone around me for making my life so much better. I can't wait to read more of your poems. OMG. you are only 12 years old??????? HOly cow, what talent for a 12 year old. Keep it up. Wow. You are very good for only being 12. I thought you were older than that? Sorry. Okay, shutting up for now. Keep up the excellent writing.
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This is so sad.Sorry about you and your b/f.Maybe yall will work things out.I went back to check how old u r and I found out you were just 12 years old!!!You are a very talented 12 year old.I think I will check out your family as well.
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Good poem, very good point.
You're easily telling us we never know what to expect for ourselves, but you're not bringing us down at the same time.
^__^ *hugs* I'm sorry you guys didn't work out, but hey, someone like you has got to get someone even better! You're a wonderful person and I really think it'll work out for you!
KI -
I thought Nick wasn't a boyfriend,just kidding I knew all along he was.hehe Moms just have a way of knowing everything.Poor you.
I still say I like Adam better!
.You are a beautiful little girl and as my Dad used to tell me,it wont be your first heartbreak and it wont be your last..Your grandpa was always right!
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WOW!! I cant totally relate to this poem. I felt like there was no hope left in the world then I look up to God and count on my friends. but hey you'll get through it. theres a lot more guys in the world whether you want to believe it or not. you'll find him.
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GOOD WRITE!
Sorry to hear about you and your boyfriend.
But don't worry . . . I'm sure you'll find another one;
if you want to, that is.
Nice to read something new from you, Sadie. Haven't seen anything for so long. Excellent job!
Brian -
I love this poem. It expresses how life can be. I been in the position where my life has sucked, and Im still kinda there, but it can be a really rough time. I can really relate to this poem. You just gotta remember life does get better and you need to stay strong through all of it no matter how weak and powerless you feel!!! Keep up the great work!
-Zach -
Well said
Aww You've done a great poem expressing how you feel, sadie, there are bad days. Bad as it is now, in my experience it does get better. I like the rhyming couplet and two nonrhyming lines, that is clever. 
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wow. I totally understand ure poem and ure comments!! I thought life sucked and I was losing touch with GOD and then I prayed and he helped me be happy. Good heartfelt poem. The end was a little dissapointing though.
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