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No Hand or Eye





Not what is seen
or touched
but what is Felt
is Real
Through the eyes
of the Heart
by the sense
of the Soul -
There is All
that
is




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"The way is not in the sky. The way is in the heart."
~ Buddha

Written June 18th, 2005

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  • Bedroom Eyes
    January 6

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    OK...I'm impressed :)) :))

    I like the way your thoughts flow...they mirror my own in ways ;)

    Especially this:

    "Through the eyes
    of the Heart
    by the sense
    of the Soul -
    There is All
    that is"

    It is too easy for the senses to be deceived when looking only through the eyes themselves. True vision is felt, and to feel is to see from within.

     

    Wonderful words of wisdom :) 


  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    November 19, 2007

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    WOW beautiful again

    Excellent,
    Wonderful,
    Short but just lovely..
    you may think i am exaggerating,
    You may think I am lying..
    SO NOT..SO NOT...HONEST!
    Your writes ARE just PURRRRfect!


  • Hekate gold member
    December 4, 2006

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    Yes...aha this reminds me of what you where saying about that dream....if I am making any since right now lol

  • Hekate gold member
    September 24, 2006
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    Awesome!!!!

    This is very profound and awesome!! I might link this on my BIO Page!! I love love love this if u wanna I'll allow u to put this one in the staff contest to if u wanna! hehe
    I love it!!!

    Edited on Sep 24, 1:11 because ''.
  • BlackRaven9
    June 2, 2006
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    This is beautifully done

    you have tallent.

    Raven
    Edited on Jun 02, 8:36 p.m. because ''.

  • eternalpoet
    March 23, 2006
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    5 Stars *****

    Hello Lady, i told you i will read you, so i am here

    well, otay so now you will not have to get surprised if you get more comments from me... because i love reading your works now.. of all the poems that i have read from you, i have learned something new... something important.. worth learning .... your wisdom attracts me ... and the way you present your knowledge, i just fell in love with your pems

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend... just keep it up.. your humble little friend.... ..... ..... ..... - vic ( who elsE? )

  • jantastic
    August 11, 2005
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    Like others who have commented I too found this to be an important reminder to listen to and feel those things which aren't tangible but rather felt from within. Succinct truth, penned with elegance.
  • RomeoTheVamp
    August 9, 2005
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    Beautiful I agree with you though Awnser everything with a question and when there are no questions... You've found truth Lol anyway Great write
    later
    RomeoTheVamp

  • Duana gold member
    July 30, 2005
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    wow- it must have been the divine that led me to your page at this exact time, because I was just struggeling with why the heck we have desire, or feelings when this life prevents them from ever materializing. I like this poem, and I still believe what you say is the 'true world', but I have become somewhat cynical since talking to you last regarding ever connecting with it. Anyway, glad to see you still writing. I enjoyed this!

  • Myfanwy
    July 27, 2005
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    Loved it - you have a knack for getting to the simple truth in a few eloquent words.

  • jezz-aussi
    July 25, 2005
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    This is so true and beautiful. It reminds me of a quote which I have up on my bedroom wall:

    "The most beautiful things in the world can not be seen, or even touched. They must be felt with the heart."--Helen Keller

    Thank you for the wonderful reminder that the only things which are truly Real are those which our hearts touch.

    Love and light,

    Jenna
  • Eric Nunnally
    July 25, 2005
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    I like

    This piece presents a philosophical conundrum to me by making sense of the senseless in the context o sensual understanding... (smile)

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    July 10, 2005
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    Thank you, forty-one I'm pleased it struck a chord for you.
    One of my favourite quotes on this theme is from Maya Angelou:

    "People may forget the things you say, they may forget the things you do, but they never forget how you make them feel!"

    ~G
  • forty-one
    July 10, 2005
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    I think that every now and then, we need little reminders of something we dream of. Something that tells us of their existence. I think I'm in a period where I need to be reminded of this.

    Not what is seen
    or touched
    but what is felt
    is real.

    Those words are screaming volumes to me.
    Thanks for that!

    Prince

  • SisterWitch
    July 4, 2005
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    yes this is so true,

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    July 4, 2005
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    To sidewinder:
    Thank you, Bill! Your comment reminded me of something by Blake..

    There is a smile of love,
    And there is a smile of deceit,
    And there is a smile of smiles
    In which these two smiles meet.
    - William Blake

    ~G

  • sidewinder silver member
    July 4, 2005
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    to touch in those places where smiles are needed...
    kindness is met
    and love is found in its simplicity.
    Heep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill

  • Andy Stephenson silver member
    June 29, 2005
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    Excellent

    We take in much of what we are exposed. We tend to retain mostly those things we focus. A person chooses of the many options surrounding one the area of focus. This is how I view your poem, though not quite as you meant.

    Andy

  • Presence
    June 26, 2005
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    Where is thy form, that it would come to me coalesced from cooperation of the ether conspiring with the desires of my mind? Why can I not see the swirling movements of eternal truths as they would solidify into the illusions which I hold on to. Why can I not experience the peace and serenity of the love contained in what I would call "lettuce"? Am I that asleep? Is my heart afraid to see and know and BE?

  • gecko
    June 24, 2005
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    no point of reality could ever conspire me to believe in the solid form. Take, and let it all just melt in with the rest of the sub quarks. A singularity? We do not have the power to become.

    Well itterated point

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 23, 2005
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    To The Phoenix Returns:
    That's not what I've said, Aashik. I'm speaking of ultimate Reality, that which is, and endures beyond transient things.

  • The Phoenix Returns
    June 23, 2005
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    Why is what we see or touch not real?

  • MariGoes gold member
    June 22, 2005
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    Yes Ge, few words telling a great truth!

    Mari

  • Ogreatbaldone gold member
    June 20, 2005
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    OOOOOHHHHH!!! I get it now that last part went right over my head the first time i read it. this is very large in poetic stature in spite of its brevity. the sentiment displayed in this is strong and for this reader rings very true, exceptional Maat...peace Terry

  • haikumonk gold member
    June 19, 2005
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    Yessssss! Nothing else to say.


  • quietly burning
    June 19, 2005
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    sublime simplicity ... as always i enjoyed.

  • SirPort
    June 19, 2005
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    excellent

    Wonderful, lovely. How true this is. I know it is because I felt it so. Brava! SirPort

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 19, 2005
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    Thank you, suseann! Yes, it is "embellished with the other senses" indeed. It is necessary that we show and prove our, or others', intent by our physical senses, but how they make us Feel determines their ultimate Truth.

    ~G

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 19, 2005
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    To DeeCrepit,

    Thank you, Terry! Yes, 'heard' is somewhat implied in 'seen' as that perceived by physical senses. Yet it is the 'sense' of the Soul which determines the Reality of all our perceptions, when we 'listen' to it

    ~G

  • fae
    June 19, 2005
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    Well done my dear. And how true

  • SusanL
    June 19, 2005
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    This is what my day is all about! My faith in love was restored today
    this poem is so timely for how I gfeel at this moment!

  • Terry-too silver member
    June 18, 2005
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    I think the "seen and touched" should include heard, for they have been disqualified as sources of reality by the commercial media and their electronic advertising. I agree completely with the truth of the rest of this poem. Succinct, Gennelle, as so many of your works tend to be, it is evidence as much of a wonderfully organized mind, as of the sureness of understanding.
    A real treat.
    Terry

  • suseann
    June 18, 2005
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    I agree. Love is felt with the heart.Often imbellished with the other senses. Very beauiful way to describe what is real to the minds eye.~~~~Suseann

  • Maatkara Moderators member
    June 18, 2005
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    Thank you, Margaret! Hehe! Oh great Seer, I believe you.

    ~G

  • MargaretG silver member
    June 18, 2005
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    Dear Gennelle, I foresee controversy in your future.
    This is the dual vision that we have been discussing on and off. The underlying reality is not available to our senses, but we have other senses we can develop for it. I think you are more certain of them than I. I love it.
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