i cant believe all these years
i wasted my time on you
if i would have known what a loser you were
i would have said right away we were through
i cant believe i thought i needed you
and that i stayed with you so long
i cant believe i thought you loved me
man was a wrong
cuz i know you were wrong
when you said you loved me
cuz the only person you love is yourself
and that is how it will always be
you broke my heart so many times
and just thought it was OK
because every time you would come back
expecting me to say it was OK
well not this time
i wont forgive and forget
all the times you hurt me
in the end you will regret
we both have made mistakes
and i admit that at a lot of points i was wrong
but at least i can admit it
and in the end stay strong
so here is the difference between us
how you can tell us apart
i may be emotionless
but at least i have a heart
Author notes
ok, this poem was a mixture of the breakup choice and the sad choice....i just kinda got my last feelings out and now i feel better...thanks for the awesome contest
Written June 18th, 2005
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wonderful
I can completely relate to this poem and I think you did a really amazing job! I am sorry you had to go through a heart break.. that is the worst. However in the long run you will see the lessons learned and the strength earned! Don't ever be sorry for how you feel. It is what you are experiancing at the time. It is ok to say I am sorry I hurt you by this but never say you are sorry about releasing your feelings! I love this piece in all it's simplicity. It flows great and the ending has an amazing punch...
Peace,
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well there is something u should know but what it is i cant say and when is up to u think about it and yes i know your confused.
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i know.....im sorry...that is just how i felt at the time...ok....so dont be mad...if you are
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And if i could take all those bad things back i would u no that.
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it was a long time ago when i was really hurt....im sorry....but that is just how i felt and i didnt mean to be mean...i was just hurt
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just so u no i did have a heart but then i gave it to you!!!
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Amazing poem i loved itand you have a good heart...keep writing all the poems i have read are amazing and i really enjoy your work you are one of my favs ever.
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your words are beautiful...its NOT about me right?
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well, it is a while after i guess, but i just wanted to get all my feelings out finally....thanks for readind my poem...i really appreciate it....
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i can relate!
nice. i love the ending. reminds me totally of an ex i had. did you write this right after ya'll broke up? it sounds like some of my work that i wrote right after. good job and thanks for entering! -
oooooo I absolutely LOVE this ending its so raw and emotionfilled.. it kicked a*S
but you might waht to fix the 2 stanza where it says "man was a wrong" You prolly meant man was I wrong but oh well.. anyways I love this.. its awesome 
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