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!?love?!

i want to tell you something
and i hope you believe me too
i really do mean it
when i say i love you

you have always been there for me
especially when i needed you the most
whether it was mega serious
or if i just needed a piece of toast

you make me feel so special
and you can always make me smile
you make every single day
living worthwhile

you mean everything to me
you may not know it right now
but someday ill let you feel it
just right now i dont know how

other than to let you know your everything to me
and i wanna be with you to the end
i really do love you
you are my best friend

Author notes

a very different poem for me....not dark....actually happy.....very weird for me....but i kinda got a lil humor in there....so ya....this is my non-serious poem...i tried....so i hope ya all like it...if not....oh well....

oh and this poem is for jesse
Written June 17th, 2005

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  • -diamond tears-
    July 17, 2005
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    I like the toast bit It made me laugh But the poem as a whole is good, i liked reading it. Thanks for entering


  • angelsslayer
    June 19, 2005
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    great job. thanks for entering

  • yoda101
    June 17, 2005
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    i love it!!!!!!!!