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In The Navy

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The boys dress in their blues
To practice kung-fu's
and even when you prove
you're a squid, they still sit on their lids
Wishing they were man enough too.

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WAR is bad
whether, you are a SEAL
Or the potato peeler
Fighting is redundant.
Written June 17th, 2005

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  • Naughtygrlred
    June 19, 2005
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    is that really u, u look so young, how cute... i'll have to get a picture of my dad in the navy and post it on here for ya! how was your father's day?


  • Catressa gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    Don't give me that shit sweetheart.. My Husband fights for me, my exhusband fought for me not you.. They did it all for you as well.. You got tossed out sweets not them.. Unlike you they have served their time and earned their purple hearts and bronze stars the right way.. I am so through with you your not fit to even wipe their ass..


  • horus8 gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    no, you're running around sprouting my personal life in a public space, or
    what you think is my personal life, I mean poking around, thinking
    I wear glasses, speculating about a bunch of
    shit you know nothing about. My life, is just
    that my life, my past, don't you think it might hurt
    my feelings to have fought for people like you
    that only care about a bunch of nonsense?
    Are you sure you're an army brat,
    because you have no respect.


  • Catressa gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    You are so full of you that no one can get in..


  • Catressa gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    But I am not running around spouting my life in a private group making it public business either ..

  • horus8 gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    Okay, so there you go.
    Just as you don't need to prove that to me.
    vice versa.

    I mean I don't need to prove who I am to you?
    Who in the fuck are you?
    get it, that's what's so funny
    this was none of your business.
    why i went to prison, or who I am as a person
    has nothing to do with you, so
    why not keep your 'opinion' out of
    my battles, it's just common courtesy.

  • Catressa gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    lol Actually Kevin can verify that I am a woman hahaha you dorkfish.. I used a debit card when I bought my memberships through paypal.. it says Catressa. R. Villanueva and many of my friends online here have spoken to me and oh yes honey I am for sure 100 percent woman..


  • horus8 gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    I'm doubtful that you actually don't have a penis and a beard,
    but I don't need you to prove it to me.

  • Catressa gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    cracking up i never said you weren't in the Navy I am doubtful you were in the Seals sweetcheeks.. Prove it.. that is what I am saying.. you got thrown out of the military right? For what?

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