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Afterlife (Cinquain)






Tranquil
Seas bear men’s souls
Toward eternity,
Waiting entrance to hereafter
Beyond




Author notes

Written for the contest 'Visual Contest #21' by Samplette.


Written June 17th, 2005

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  • Elrenia
    June 17, 2005
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    Thank you. I am glad you like it. Great picture. It cannot help but inspire.


  • Samplette gold member
    June 17, 2005
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    A nicely done cinquain. Great form, and it works well with the picture. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam