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peter

Peter, peter.....
pumpkin eater....
had a wife...
and could not keep her...

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Written June 17th, 2005

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  • playboi
    June 19, 2005
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    Funny

    That was Funny he he ha ha
    that was good really good
    Luv PLayboi

  • almostevilteddy
    June 17, 2005
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    i don't know if you know this but this is already a nursery rhyme.


  • Rhynoceros
    June 17, 2005
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    lol that was funny.... i giggled not once but twice


  • June 17, 2005
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    LMAO
    Good Job

  • amegan01
    June 17, 2005
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    hope u all laugh

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