LIFE
Some times in life you get hurts that cut you deep
deep like a razor being thrusted against soft skin
you feel such anger such deep deep anger
you want to just curl up and die
anything must be better then the hurt and anger you feel
......what to do, what to do?.....
People who call themselves your friends and tell you they care
burn you and betray you like you mean nothing
you wonder why even try and trust
why do i care
this is life.....
you didn't ask for it to be this way
it just is....
and no matter what you do
life gets the best of you
Author notes
THE PICTURE OF THE CHILD REPRESENTS HOW LIFE CAN GET THE BEST OF ANYONE AND IS NOT ALWAYS FAIR
Written June 16th, 2005
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So powerful, and it doesn't even rhyme...
The gritty, surreal nature underlying is what really got to me in this poem...this bold statement of dissatisfaction of life, being in itself, as you stated, sometimes to much to handle - and all too true, might I add. The picture (worth a thousand words in itself) is simply the cherry to top it all. -
i am there right now also and it sux!!! best of luck to your situation
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oh this is great. i know what you mean. i've been stuck in a fued between two friends lately... grrr.
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wow..this poem is amazing. Definetly a feeling that I can relate to. You should become more confident about your writing skills because you certainly have the right to be. You seem pretty talented to me. Can't wait to read more..
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THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR YOUR ENCOURAGING WORDS....IT MEANS THE WORLD....
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Sad and true words, amazing the truth you conveyed in such a small amount of words. Victims aren't we all. Thanks for the comment, much appreciated.
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great job
lyndsey how can u say u suck??????????? this totally effing rocks babydoll and dont you ever let me hear you say that you cant write again! got it? good. this was a great write, keep it up suga~~ P, L, & E....
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SWEET SHIT
thanks for the comment on mine your poem is good i really should go get my journal outta my room and add some poems but i dont feel like it at the moment lol im lazy anyways i loved this poem it was put together well two thumbs up for you -
thanks..... its how i feel right now...and well i wanted to share it..i was kinda not sure... i dont have much confidence in my poems....but ur comment really made me feel like i dont suck to bad....lol thanks
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wow I really like this!! its very deep and powerful, I can totally relate to the feeling! I know exactly how you feel!! anyway, wonderful topic to write about. KEep up the brilliant work my AP friend!! xXxXx <3 *Jordan**
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