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Upon Perfumed Paper

Lavender kissed rain drops
Fall against my face
Upon perfumed paper
My pen begins to trace

Up and over
Around and back again
Written vows to my love
That will never come to an end

Vows carried from heart to heart
Those that not even time can break
Carried soul to soul
Ones that can cause the entire earth to shake

Angelic songs carried upon the winds
Whisper promises of a charmed eternity
Together, forever and always
Now to infinity




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Written June 16th, 2005

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  • grannyeri gold member
    October 25, 2005
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    A lovely poem, wonderfull sentiments and words of love and a future. Well penned.


  • Sunkissedrose
    June 16, 2005
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    Just beautiful. I love the fact that the pic on the left, kind of takes on a lavander hue. I also like your imagery flows from word to word. Excellent piece.
    ~Carrie