How Will You Spank Me?
(Capped pronouns signify Dominant, uncapped are submissive)
How will You spank me? Must i beg Your touch?
You spank me with Your paddle, crop or hand.
my form bent over, trying not to stand
i struggle inside believing, “that didn’t hurt… much.”
You spank me to the level of intense pain
some masochists crave; cane and whip.
You spank me freely, as Your hand bites my hips.
You spank me fiercely, i refuse in disdain.
You spank me and i shiver in delight
from Your firm hand, Your physical wisdom imparts.
Spank me with the spanking i crave tonight.
i beg, Master. You spank with an art,
talent, control, You hold the power; for, if i fight,
You will but spank me more so it smarts.
The Poem I Made a Parody On
How Do I Love Thee? By Elizabeth Barrett Browning
How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of being and ideal grace.
I love thee to the level of every day’s
Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light.
I love thee freely, as men strive for right.
I love thee purely, as they turn from praise.
I love thee with the passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood’s faith.
I love thee with a love I seem to lose
With my lost saints. I love with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life; and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death.
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Written June 16th, 2005
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lovely tales of BDSM told from both perspectives. I like!
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I hadn't even noticed that it didn't rhyme, that's why. Thanks! I'm going to adjust it just now. I'm glad you are enjoying!
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PS, omitted to add praise for your proper use of capitalisation
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TriPpy is right - overthrowing the feeling of EBB and subverting it with a little BDSM is a stunning idea. And you took over her rhyme scheme very accurately, everywhere except in the first verse, where you could so easily have rhymed hand/stand. What was your idea there?
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Oh wow. I love this poem and it's amazing you took an awesomly innocent poem and made it into a spanking fetish poem, lol. Very creative. Good write.. turned me on lol
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Yes
Oh my spanking..Sounds good to me
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oooo this was great. It was a nice way to end the night's reading. I'm glad I was able to catch up before shower time. I look forward to reading more. >;o)
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