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When I Die...

when i die all the flowers will bloom
as if they were in springtime...

when i die the sun will shine bright,
when i die no one will shed a tear

when i die they'll be filled with cheer...
when i die the sky will clear from all sorrow,
when i die the stars will shine bright
with the moon...

when i die cancer, world hunger, war,and
crime will cease to exist,

when i die the world will be filled with
perfect bliss..

when i die these would be my last wishes.

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Written June 16th, 2005

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  • preciouscatie
    June 17, 2005
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    nice

    wow hey juana...i like the poem its kinda scary for me wanting to become a nun...but its really good keep it up !!!!tmo thumbs up.....


  • Tears-of-Glass
    June 16, 2005
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    wow thi is really ood!!!! love all ur work ! keep it up!
    ~*~chanel~*~