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No less Happy Or More Insane

Im age 14
In my world noone can die,
loolypops fall from the sky
my world is green and full of trees
its overcome by lakes and seas
nothing is  a complication
understand my interpritation
it seems insane
but it will never rain again
im age 17
in my world people sometimes die
no one explains or tells me why.
people called friends drift in and out
at first there nice and then they shout
in my world people are pety and week
such small things can make them freek
people see things as  black and white
to be honest
my new world is prity shite
theres sometimes a rainbow
it seems insane
but its started to rain all over again


Im no less happy or more insane
just growing older and feeling the pain.

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Author notes

I wrote the first part at age 14 ans the second part aged 17.
Written June 16th, 2005

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