Dreams like this
Make me want to cry.
Free to fly, free to go.
Escape the shadows in which I live.
Never coming back, I feel alive.
No more deathly poems for ink to trace,
No more teardrops down my face.
From gray to white,
Dark to light.
Worries shattered,
Stars at night.
Knowing this will never come,
Shatters my dreams.
I have not won.
Author notes
I dunno, an old poem I found about wishing I could escape into the dreams I had.
Its alright.
Written June 16th, 2005
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wow this is great... so tender and yet so hopeful great write!
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Hey there, I havent read much lately, so I'm backtracking ... first one here...Nice write, I seem to find that my older peoms are the better ones, Maybe they just need time to settle, I dunno.. Good write, you can explain a lot without coming out and bluntly tell what your trying to say,
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reallly like that line~ for some reason who knows, I'm odd... gotta go though look at some more poems. ttyl and I wait for your next one. -
This was just awesome! I loved the little ending and how you were able to express yourself without just saying it straight out. It made me think and I liked that! Keep up the great work!
peace and love,
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very good
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yay go hannah! yay! haha.. I like, i like!!
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i like this alot...very well written.
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I really like this poem for i know how you feel. i cant wait to get around to reading some more of your poems. you are a great writer and keep it up
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