Come drink the glasses filled with thick, cold blood.
Poison drips from my crimson lips;
Wipe it away with napkins laced with human hair.
Sheets of darkness drape themselves over your shredded heart;
Wrap it up and tie it with a bow.
Come, follow me into the shadows of my palace.
Let me seduce your young soul.
Let me take control.
Lay you down into a pool of black sheets.
Place myself on top of you, staring into your
Cold, crystal-blue eyes.
I run my fingers through your long, jet-black hair.
Wipe away your tears with the tip of my finger.
My face has fallen an inch from yours.
My eager lips press against the sweetness of your lips
With an excited touch.
Your gentle hands pull my waist down.
Pressing ourselves against each other,
My tongue slips past the door of your lips,
Licking at the sweet dew of lust.
My hands run down your wanting body and up again,
Past your neck,
Where the blood runs sweet.
Everything stops, you look into my seducing eyes.
I run the back of my hand over the flawless skin of your cheek.
It is time.
Time to sink my teeth into your awaiting neck.
Such a burning desire for your delicious blood.
You look so clueless, so innocent, just lying there, wanting more.
So beautiful, such a masterpiece.
I decide to take one long, last look
Into those crystal-blue eyes.
Author notes
This poem....this poem is weird. It doesnt really flow. Its kind of a big clump of detailed lines put together. Some short, some long. not too great.
The two people in this poem are no one in paticular....they are two girls though. Obviously, one is a vampire. But, the person she has seduced, seems to have seduced her. Therefore, you put the ending in....whether the seduced girl dies or not. Maybe the vampire spares her because she is too much in love with her beauty...? Or maybe she needs the sweet blood too bad to spare this girl...? i guess you decide.
Crimson
Written June 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- *Dark Poetry Welcomed* by cold fire77.
300 points, ended July 2, 2005, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I Like this, I get choices... laughs... Good write, very different, I like how you discribe things and my favorite like was the "crystal-blue eyes" one... just burns that picture into my eyes. I can see it.. liked it.. nice write

