You are the one who fights away my fears.
You are the one who wipes away my tears.
You are the one who never left my side.
You are the one who never let me die.
You are the one who loved me when no one else would.
You are the one who told me to try all the new things I could.
You are the one who pulled me close when I was alone.
You are the one whose brightest star always shone.
You are the one who saw me to the end.
And you are the one who will receive all the love that I send.
Author notes
Dedicated to my boyfriend who is always there for me and who loves me unconditionally and for no particualr reason excpet for that I am perfect to him in EVERY way.
I love you, Baby.
Written June 16th, 2005
A contest entry
- Depression, Sadness, Love by BandGeek101.
300 points, ended June 16, 2006, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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A very loving poem. I could sense that love was over flowing in each and every word. Love has such powers. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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Beautiful sentiments for the one you love. I love the emotions you brought to the page. The repetition in the beginning of each line is somewhat monotonous but the flow of the feelings is wonderful. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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Not something that I would read at my wedding, but definately something I would read to Mathew in private - it's perfect for that because it is so true - exactly like that, likeit's been written about Mathew! Thanks for entering!! Take care Blissful princess
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Great poem...u r so lucky to have a guy like that...he sounds like a great person who treats u right
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he truly is.
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Excellent
it must be wonderful to be loved.
this is a wonderful piece,your boyfriend must be great to have such a great person like you.
-cheers -
this makes me sad i wish i had someone like this but this poem is really good.emotion,flow,and rhyming was good.Its is great to have someone like that
but yea this poem is really good keep writting more poetry like this.
much love amber
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Thank you for the comment angel305. He did love this poem, and he has done so much for me. He helps me and supports me in every decision I make.
Tears
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He did read this and he did love it. I thank him for being the rock i lean on and the shoulder I cry on. I wasn't with him at the time when I wrote this and I felt so lonley he wasn't there to cheer me up.
Tears
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Ty, cutiepie, he does do a lot for me, and he is still doing more for me. He believes in me more than anyone else ever has (besides my sister)and that's why I love him.
Tears
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nice!
wow! this is such a sweet poem, im sure your boyfriend must have loved this, great job, keep it up! -
This was absolutely beautiful and a poem which I sincerely hope that your boyfriend read and loved. Saying thank you to people who helped us is often difficult but you've done it so well here. The single lines stand out alone, each encompassing such a huge time or way of support.
Thank you for supporting this contest with your entry and good luck in judging.
~Faded -
Ah...such a wonderful tribute to your boyfriend
Often they are the ones who get overlooked but do the most in times of need. Excellent
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Great Job
This is really good also... I am glad that you found Tony and that he makes you feel at least a little better...I hope that everything works out for the better... just remember to take one day at a time one obstacle at a time and never stop trying!!! You are going through a hard time and it will get better!! (I probably should have put this on the other one I commented on!!!)
Great Write!! Dont stop!
~Jodi -
I'm not sure if it still sounds that way, but I changed it a little. When I reread it, I did notice that little thing, but I could never think of a line... now I finally did.
Tears
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Aww, that is so uplifting and so beautiful! I liked the rhymes...flowed with the emotion...Ooo0o...Hey, doesnt it rock to know therez someone out there watching out for ya. The poem was just beautiful except...one line was a lttle choppy:
"You are the one who told me I could do anything I could"
maybe you could fix it? if you can write such an inrspiring poem, i bet you can fix it if you wanna. every line is just beautiful!
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how beautiful, i lurv the end, so sad yet so beautiful.
keep it up
~Lee
PS u shud enter this in a contest or sumthing, it wud win something
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