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she sits and stares
wonders why no one cares
so afraid of what they think
she cuts her wrists and signs a suicide note in bloody ink

she's confused by this world
after all she's only a 16 year old girl
how you must have to do bad things to get to good places
how there's always smiles on her enemies faces

so she changed; one day she was different
not the way she was before
she was stronger, she did'nt;t care what they said
at the end of the day though...she was dead

not finished yet sorry

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sorry I'm not finished yet...so I'll work on it later
Written June 16th, 2005

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  • sober jake
    July 4, 2005
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    hey good work. its 5 in the morning and ive been on a five day bender. ill check more out later. your really interesting.
    Edited on Jul 04, 3:34 because ''.