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Would you believe me if
I told you that Im not
Sure if this will work?
That Im having 2nd
Thoughts and the more
I think about it
The more I convince
Myself that I cant
love you. The more
I feel myself
Fall for you the
Harder I try to
Catch myself but
I only fall faster.
I cant do this
If this is how
Our relationship
Is going to be.
I cant stand
How much you
Abuse your bad
Habit! It kills
Me knowing that
No matter what
I say youll forever
Do that. Was this
Just a mistake?
Should I never
Had said yes?
Maybe not but
Baby I'll try
To make the
Best out of this bad situation!!!
Author notes
i didnt write it right on purpose...i really kno how to set up a poem...lol. its not that good or anything but i wanted to put up something new...lol
Written June 16th, 2005
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Hey- I like that. ugh... it's cool. Your heart kicks ass, man. It kicks ASS!!!! Eff man, my back hurts. This goddamned computer chair
.. I need a new one lol
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yea i kno. what u mean about not writing and falling out with it i can't say i fail out i just gave up it seems like everything i write isnt good enough anymore or ever was...this was a great poem, personal...anyways im glad ur back and writing and all that great stuff ttyl
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hi amanda! i hope you are enjoying your summer vacation! about the poem, it's grrrreat! i like how it is set up and i like how it paints a picture in my head. i can just see you physically falling, struggling to live happily. Amazing write. if this is personal, all i can say is listen to your heart. Sister in Christ, jess
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Hey girly, it's been forever! Sorry I didn't comment on this sooner. I hope everything's good for you now, and if not, I'm always here for you, even if it doesn't always seem that way. I really like this poem--the rhythm's good, and I like the set-up--so screw anyone who says it's "wrong."
I love ya, Manda, see ya soon!
~Kelsey -
Hmmm... < That is usually how I begin all comments... I remember when Cara said this to me. Actually, it was close to this....
Anyway, Ilike it. You portrayed a very familiar notion at your age...
Great poem...
Sincerely,
chadrick -
hey girl, i know its been a good year since you have heard from me, but this is Tammy..aka heavenly poet. How have you been? I hope this is not something about you..if so, i am here for you girl..relationships are hard..this i know, i am going through a divorce right now and its hard. hang in there, you will know what to do...just trust in your heart.
Tammy
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yo is this about lupa if so wtf lol
james -
Hey it's Amber. I really liked this cuz i know how that feels which makes me feel bad cuz it aint a good feelin...so if ya wanna (or needa) talk just get me on AIM, alright? Hope ya feel better! ~lil princess~
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