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For Daniel McColm

you made me fall in love with you,
we had good times,
you left me to suffer the loss of a great guy,
i shiver when I'm around you,
i remember the way you sent a shiver down my spin when you kissed my neck,
your the only one i dream about,
please come back into my life,
i want to be more than friends again,
i can never forget the smile, the lips, the hands, the love.......
i need you!

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  • playboi
    June 19, 2005
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    Great

    Amegan01 as your friend GET OVER HIM
    plz But it was a nice good poem
    and no need to sound mean
    Luv Playboi


  • June 17, 2005
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    Im sry i hope u get this guy back.
    Great Job