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Angels Arms

im so numb
numb to everything
and i ask for wings
wings to fly away
but whats the point when
i cant feel the wind on my face
I'd rather stay here
on this earth and smother
for one chance to hold you in my arms
i'd give up the world to be in your arms
i'd give up the sound of music the sunrise
i'd do it all for you
i need you
your my breath and my life
everyhting ive ever dreamed of
I found comfort in the sound of your voice
i found refuge in the depths of your eyes
i gave it all up for you
for the chance to be
in the arms of my angel

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Aehh just read it

Written June 15th, 2005

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  • ThatAmazingFeeling
    July 11, 2005
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    Yup

    Once again, you write something disgustingly good and touching and beautiful. Fuck off. Just kidding, you should give me writing tips. Love ya.


  • Autumn Raine
    June 22, 2005
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    Ahhh...sweet love I love your lines when you were desribing how you wanted wings. I have always wanted wings.
    "Id rather stay here on this earth and smother..." <<very deep.

    This poem really expressed how much you love this guy I love the feeling of loving someone. Hopefully he would do the same thing for you?

    "for the chance to be in the arms of my angel"

    Beautiful. Beautifully done.
    Love it

    ~Mercy