I didnt love you when I saw you.
I still don't.
Yet, when I saw you pass by me,
my world changed.
And when you walked by,
it hurt me not to say anything
but how could I?
You looked so happy
and I didnt want to tell you;
didn't want that expression I loved
to change
so I watched you walk by,
and for a few seconds, felt a pain
sharp enough to cut the sky
and make the clouds bleed
like they bled on me each day since.
I didnt love you when I saw you
...I didnt have to.
Author notes
...This is one of the only non-humor poems I have written. I do not want this critiqued, I just felt like sharing it...It is about a stranger who i have only seen once, for an instant, as she walked by me. I new instantly that I was not in love with her, but that there was just something about her that made we want to write...and when I think about that day and do not write, it hurts.
Written June 15th, 2005
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This needs no critiquing hun.. this was a great write.. I'm amazed really.. I'm glad you shared it.. I have yet to have this happen to me and I'm sure that it more then likely never will, but it would be a great thing.. so yeah I'm glad you shared it.. great write..
~Jet
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