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But a Dream

We’ll make love by firelight,
Be drenched in sweat—
So sweet, like the fire—bright,
Hot on silken sheets in bed

My nails will mark you mine
I am here for you, love
I’ll moan yours—moan mine
I am here for you, love

We’ll be under the stars—so bright
And dance together
Kiss me deeply—in the night
Hold me now, forever

My eyes look deep and see
I am yours, love
Your eyes look deep and see
I am yours, love

Here we are, tonight
Upon our four post throne
By the fire’s light
Together, but alone

My lips say to you
I am but a dream, love
For now I belong to you
I am but a dream, love

But I am yours

Author notes

Just a poem. Means nothing, really. Just a guy fantasizing, I suppose.
Written June 15th, 2005

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  • RevoltedHorror
    June 17, 2005
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    Heh. Just felt like rambling something off when I was bored, and this is the product. Not the best, though. But thanks for your comments. See ya later,

    JASMINE


  • bird-mad girl
    June 16, 2005
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    hehe, having a naughty fantasy now are we? well, hey, that's all fun to do. If guys can do it, so can chicks, right?
    This was a romantic fantasy, I love it. I like the ending, it was breath taking.

    Always and Forever,
    ~Kendal