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Untold Secret

That day when you came

You stood looking down the sky ready to rain

Hell had broken loose in those eyes

Your shoulders moved with heavy sighs

The vessal of your heart had been breached

I wasn't sure your thoughts could be reached

With a drawn in breath you looked up

Ready to melt into a cup

Why you stood on my doorstep I never knew

I stood there not knowing what to do

The wind started to blow

Your heart was dragged in tow

Hero's never are supposed to fail

Yet that day my soul turned pale

Your heart blead that day

I gapped not knowing what to say

I blamed myself ever since

hoping, wishing I could be rinsed

Never can I let go of the sight

When your eyes held mine tight

If only you could hear my confession

my heart has been hurt with oppression

Anger sweltered in my soul

It didn't hesitate to take its toll

Ripped apart I hated your deeds

I thought you could meet all my needs

Forgiveness is there but I still wish you to know

There in my heart deep and low

A secret lay hiden from you

Or maybe you already knew

You are my hero no matter what

Even that day when you were stuck in a rut

All there was to tell was left unsaid

The love was never to be read

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Written December 5th, 2004

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  • Mariposita
    June 19, 2005
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    i love this poem. it really shows how you felt. i am really glad that you wrote this poem because it is beautiful. i loved it. nice owrk. keep it up!
    love you always,
    april


  • Mariposita
    June 15, 2005
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    nice poem. good luck in the contest. and thanks for entering!