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Two Indians

Silent steps slid across the wooded floor

Above the treetops the birds enjoy a soar

A grunt and scream breaks out

We give a disgusted shout

Spider down the back

Laughter has no lack

Slippin and sliddin

Into eachother we're colliding

Off go the shoes

inturrupting a rabbits snooze

roll the pants high

We both utter a shivering cry

The water shoots like pegs

and chills our 'hairy burning'  legs

Like pirates we spar

Each with our own wooden bar

Two little Indians yell

And thats all I'm gonna tell

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Written June 15th, 2005

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