Don't say you love me unless you know for sure
Don't say you are my pains cure
Or that your love can endure
You aren't my friend until you've seen me bleed
and you've been there in my time of need
There are times when you must lead
I will be watching you
I don't think you have a clue
Some ask thinking they ask to much
This and that, that and such
But in reality they ask to little
I'm not trying to belittle
But you must know I have eyes and ears
I have a heart that is able to shed tears
I won't give this easily just to please
Not even if you beg on your knees
Sometimes I care to much I break
Even though I fake
But this is something you can't so simpley take
God will come before all
Even if that means I miss your call
There are times when I crawl but He will not let me fall
Can you put Him before me, dear friend can't you see that this is what I believe.
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Strong
A very strong stance and very well put together. Nothing should inhibit His glory, but work towards it. The last verse hits the hardest and it left with as much, if not more power then it started with. -
Amazing :-)
Wow this was a really really good poem. Nice write!!!!!! It was very well written and rhymed perfectly. Excellent job. I know how you feel here, this poem is great. You write kinda like I do and thats awesome. But yeah keep up the excellent writing, this was amazing!!!!!!!-BB
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