I tremble with tears streaming from my eyes,
My heart feels as though it were to break,
Crumble, Crush, deteriorate,
As though the whole world has stopped in time.
I look up to view my mascara stained face,
My aching body, cold from the pain,
Isolated, numb, alone,
Then i see your eyes cast a glimpse into mine.
You raise my head, with your gentle hands,
I look deep into your eyes searching for answers,
Why?, Is it me?, What did i do?
My anger beats back the remainder of tears.
The words echo through my mind,
A repetitive drum, "We're over"
Aching, Dying, Everlasting,
My legs can't stand the weight of my heart.
You hold me with a warm feeling,
I use to feel safe in your arms,
Happy, content, loved,
Now i feel pushed out into the ongoing vortex.
I use to think our love was forever,
You were mine to keep close,
My treasure, My hope, My life,
You looked at me in a way no-one else would.
You were the air i breathed,
You were the love i felt,
You were the tears i cried,
You were the hope i now lost.
And now i lie hear broken and alone,
You left me to collect the pieces of an unfix-able heart,
Broken, Sharp, pain,
I thought you were different.
The smell you left on my pillow has gone,
The smile that brightened my room is dull,
Dark, brittle, insecure,
I now know the meaning of love.
Love is a feeling I felt with you,
Love is a desire i needed to have,
Love is a smile only you could make,
But now love is me living without you with no more heartache.
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Written June 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- All guys suck !!!! by Dark-Huntress.
300 points, ended November 6, 2005, 25 entries
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awsome poem, lots of them emotions... but for real i do like this poem alot it shows how deeply someone can be in love.
"But now love is me living without you with no more heartache."
I really like how that just fit so well with the whole poem, good poem and good ending -
omg!!! thats amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol gr8 write huni xxxx
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this somehow seems familiar! anyway, nice write, bringing tears and feeling to my cold, broken heart....anyway, good luck with the contest...l8az love ya sky xxxxx
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The smell you left on my pillow has gone,
*The smile that brightened my room is dull,
Dark, brittle, insecure,
I now know the meaning of love.*
i love that verse!
fab poem! this is really well written with so much emotion
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