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Nothing Lasts Forever

My happiness was crushed to pieces
By my worthless mind.



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not very poetic, just pulled a sentence from my thoughts.
Written June 15th, 2005

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  • AbeLLa5291
    June 15, 2005
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    two lines but mean so much. nice write!>><< Wow, I just reread this one...and I find so much more in the writing than I did before...Maybe its just what I've been through this summer.. I dont know..But those two lines just..ya... thought I'd just update..laughs...ttyl
    Edited on Sep 10, 8:46 p.m. because 'needed to update... ??'.


  • aboycalledtrevor
    June 15, 2005
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    short and sweet

    is this a quote you came up with or did these lines insire you to write and you just havent finished? either way, its only 2 simple lines but they have such strong meaning behind them