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Eyes of Lust

I look at you; you’re naked, no matter what you wear
I peel off your discretion and leave your body bare

Your skin so soft and silky, I taste you with my eyes
And lick you with my vision, and hear your aching sighs

I pull your body closer; I feel your warm embrace
Your lips are wet with passion; my mind begins to race

I slide my tongue inside you; your lips are open wide
You whimper as I suck you into where you cannot hide

I feel your body moving; your hips begin to sway
You push yourself towards me then gently pull away

You’re aching and I smell it, your scent sticks to my lips
I reach down to your waistline and thrust against your hips

Your body heat ignites me; your passion I despise
Because even without feeling, I see it in your eyes



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Written June 15th, 2005

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  • chasing rainbows
    August 14, 2008
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    Surprised me... well done.

    Peace & love,
    xx Sin


  • Julie Eke
    July 17, 2005
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    wow, this was incredible, so hot and twisted! I loved the rhyming and the flow, i just can't stop reading it!!!!!