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Crazy

give me the rush
the fuming energy
the endless feelings
only you make me feel

when i sing
when i dance
your there watching
that smile
playing on your lips
ripping me apart

I'm going out of my mind
this endless love
this rushing blood
this new found passion
just yours and mine

i just want to scream
just want to run
spinning into your arms
my out of control way
'cuz that's how you love me

seeing you in the crowd
making you proud
finding the words
saying it aloud

I'm going out of my mind
this endless love
this rushing blood
this new found passion
just yours and mine

its only singing
just another song
but not to you
not to me
because you see
its just for you and me

i want to make you laugh
i want to make you scream
i want you to, to hold me
'cuz you drive me crazy

I'm going out of my mind
this endless love
this rushing blood
this new found passion
just yours and mine

Author notes

spaztastica.  and guess what??? its not dark *le gasp*
Written June 14th, 2005

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  • Kochibo
    September 16, 2005
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    very romantic babe. thsi is like the shit my bf writes to me, for reals. only, i dont feel the same way. *guilt trip*

    ~Leasha


  • w8ing4mystar
    June 14, 2005
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    wanna know somthing creepy??? i dont *sweatdrop*

  • Gold3nP3n
    June 14, 2005
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    Very nice job! It's great for people to find someone they truly love and are happy with! A very devotional piece of work, you must have someone very special out there! Thanks!

    Best wishes,

    Y2Shaggy


  • Trixie Sweetlips
    June 14, 2005
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    Great Read!

    This is a well written piece full of energy, devotion, emotion, and of course...love. If absence makes the heart grow fonder then love turns one into a crazed person (but in a good way most of the time). Thanks for sharing!