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Lil Things

Steal the stars from the sky
Offer them to you
Hold you at night
Beneath the moon
Make love to you
Morning, noon and night
Waking you with soft lil kisses
And breakfast in bed
Take away your pain
And tend your wounds
Heal your broken heart
Leave lil hidden love notes
In your wallet
A rose on your pillow
A love poem on your dresser
A card to thank you
For the love you give
Bottle the tears I cry
When you are not here
Give them to you
To show you I care
Send you to work
With an "I'll miss you" kiss
Welcome you home
With a "Come and get me grin"
Kidnap you
Hide you away
A secret rendezvous
A place for us to play
Caress your body and soul
Let my embrace
Warm you when cold
Hold your hand
When we walk
Guiding each other
As we grow old
These are the just a few
Of the lil things I would do





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Written June 14th, 2005

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  • Painful Tears Fall
    December 8, 2005
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    great

    WOW! this was great. it was really deep and it was almost like you were telling you thoughts of the heart. i loved how you were telling about putting i love you notes in his wallet! that was really sweet. well i'll put it this way.. if i was a guy then i thinkthat i woudl want to be with you. -lol- its funny but yeah i loved this one alot! great job!


  • CountryCousin
    December 6, 2005
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    A beautiful write here.

    Well this is going to make a great Valentine Day sentiment and right now it is a rather delicious reading poem that just says the right thing. You truly penned a very good piece here.