I dream of the day,
when you and I are
together.
I dream of the day,
that you accept this
letter.
I dream of the day,
that inter-racial
relationships
are accepted within
this community.
I dream of the day,
when I can tell you
about this
admiration
I have for you.
All I ever do is dream
of the day,
when you see me in the
same way that I see you.
If this day-dream never
comes true....
I will still be happy
because
I was able to dream
of you.
Yvonne J. Griffin
12/02/02
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To my future, whoever you are. :)
Written December 2nd, 2002
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Beautiful & Sweet
This was an absolutely beautiful poem! You did a great job. I was having a bad day and this cheered me up. Thank you for the uplifiting and thank you for sharing.
*Jamie* -
excellent
Sweet write, especially the ending...
I will still be happy
because
I was able to dream
of you.
Very heartfelt write, well done once again.
Cheers,
Meg -
don't touch it!
we share the same hopes here hun...you expressed this perfectly
:)~~D -
don't touch it!
Emotional and touching words, expressed very well.
~Kathy -
neutral
Touching write :) -
neutral
Nice write! Honest and warm, yet filled with unrequited love. Someday, we'll be able to see beyond the external shells that house our souls and love what's inside -- no restrictions, no reservations. Hope you find love... it's well worth waiting for! -
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THat was really nice and sweet. I know how frustrating it is waiting for the person u dream about. When they come its worth the wait. :) Nice write :) Twigg -
don't touch it!
oh this is so sweet and touching Yvonne..I hope you don't have to wait too long to find this person..but it's so nice to keep a warm and wonderful dream in your heart always...such a beautiful, heartfelt write!!! :))
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