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You

Like a gentle breeze across my face
You whisper everything I want to hear
Everything I hope to hear
Everything I need to hear

Like the eagle with his watchful eye
You send me soaring higher than a mountain
Higher than the trees and clouds
Higher than the earth and sky

Like the fine line between life and death
You warn me when i'm in danger saving me from pain
Saving me from angst
Saving me from death

Like you have protected me
I will always care for you
Always thing of you
Always be there for you

Author notes

Please give me an applause - Worked so much harder on this one. I wrote it long ago - Just re-found it. Thanks
Written June 14th, 2005

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  • gprcrower
    June 15, 2005
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    Its really good.
    Love it, Id applaud you- but I dont feel like giving you my points
    You spelt think with a g in the last stanza, thought u may want to know.