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Because I Never Knew

We started out as good friends
I went and made it more
Maybe this is all my fault
Or
Maybe not

Throughout the two years that I've known you
I've always been honest
How I feel about you
My hopes
and
My dreams
Where lost when I lost you

Tears running from my eyes
Constantly
Almost like a waterfall

With you my heart was over filled with love

You made me realize what life has to offer

The love you gave was the most valuable gift I've ever received

One kiss changed my life
Dreams of you and me together forever

Because I never knew that everything was based around a lie

I wonder if the love gave
To me was a mistake
Am I the one that deserves your love

I wanna know what was
The purpose of all the lies
Was it to make me think
That you cared about me

Why, why, why

I didn't know I could be so blind
Not to see it before

Well it's all up to you now
So if you're man enough
Please explain
Because
I never knew what was the deal

Author notes

It sucks
Written June 14th, 2005

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  • tatersalad
    December 7, 2005
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    Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it!


  • Infinite Butterfly
    November 30, 2005
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    I love it! it convayed feelings very well. You wrote exactly how I feel right now. Great write!! love all your poems!!

    ~Silently watching


  • tatersalad
    June 14, 2005
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    thanks alot


  • June 14, 2005
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    Great expression of emotion... It doesn't suck...
    I enjoyed it...
    ~Lynnette