Stegosaurus
how you bore us
with your tiny brain
Stegosaurus
you ignore us
standing in the rain
Stegosaurus
born a Taurus
plates upon your back
Stegosaurus
you implore us
not to use your rack
Stegosaurus
like a chorus
holler, groan and wail
Stegosaurus
please don't gore us
with spikes upon your tail
Author notes
I commented on "A dino wonder" and "Dragons devine"
Written June 14th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Dinosaurs vs. Dragons by Diamond.
750 points, ended June 25, 2005, 12 entries
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Hi my friend loved it, great humour , you brightened my day we need fun poems there are not enough of them, you made me smile and that is no mean feat, you get my applause, enchanting this is so easy for children to remember and teaches them something, great, all the best, hugs Di
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Wow I really liked this. Usually around here I see dark poetry with no ray of sunshine visible. This piece made me smile and the bright background just added to this whole feeling. This was completely amazing. Thank you for this.
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Really nice rhyme here about the "stego". I think it's cute and charming and the first time off reading this, it gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. A good kid's poem here, but good enough for adults to wade through as well.
Abby Eyeball
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Ha ha! I got a good kick out of this, thank you for sharing it gave me a laugh out of my depression!
-The one they sometimes call Jeni -
Very cute poem. Very funny too. Little dark for a children's poem, but sometimes that works well in that genre. Good stuff. Very fun to read.
Cheers,
Yossarian -
can't please everybody, I guess
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hahahahaha.... clever write. Quite an entertaining read indeed.
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I loved rhyming Stegasaurus with "bore us" and "ignore us" but by the time you got to "Taurus" I felt you were in danger of running out of steam! And I hate the word "holler".
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Simple but eloquent - a delightful poem about this ancient creature that is sure to delight and amuse everyone from 3 to 103 years old. I enjoyed this.
Best wishes,
Moses -
This is such a cute little poem, I think my neices and nephews would really enjoy it, so I should bookmark this one. Great job, I really liked it.
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A lovely little ditty indeed, easy for children as well as adults to remember. It's cute and child friendly and yes the background is really cool also. Thank you for entering and good luck.
Avril
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i like the lyrical tone to this.it is a pleasnt little ditty that the kids will find enjoyable and quite easy to remember.it has the repetition that helps a child with reading skills.thank you for this entry.
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This is really cute, i love this color you chose for the background has a dragon feel to it
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