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Hot Sex Boy

He is hott

I like his belt

I want to be his belt

I dont know his name...

..yet

He is hott

His hair is blonde

His pants are tight

His boxers are blue

His eyes are brown

His shoelaces are pink




He is total sex

Author notes

yeah who cares that the only poem ive actually got a chance to put on  here is as obsessy/sad as this....yeah. wah!
Written June 14th, 2005

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  • Wish-Of-Dreams
    March 29, 2006
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    this was hot, very, the hole thing and the hole outlook on it, i love it, havent heard from you, hit me up sweetheart. miss you and excellent write. cya.

  • SweetSerinity
    June 21, 2005
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    DUDE! i just realized you described my cuzin taylor! WOAH!

  • heartatselfdestruct
    June 15, 2005
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    oh yeah, you know kristen likes your poem ALMOST (almost being the key word) as much as me. you cant deny that, and youre just jealous cause you dont give her as much sex as i do. k, peace out manwhore you know i love you still


  • brokensmile68
    June 15, 2005
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    k

  • SweetSerinity
    June 15, 2005
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    YOU BET YOUR ASS IT WAS HOT! I LOVE THIS POEM ALMOST AS MUCH AS JAMIE! HAH KIDDING. okay. okay. okay. okay. i wonder how many points i can get out of this comment. i wonder if they read your commenst. bsb fo life! hehehehehhheehehehehe

  • dreamer4life
    June 15, 2005
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    I like this poem. It is hot.

  • Jazebel
    June 14, 2005
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    lol, His shoelaces are pink
    This was a good write thanks for the chuckle.

  • heartatselfdestruct
    June 14, 2005
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    that was the best poem in the world, OMG!!! you rock! and you are so much more total sex than him oh yeah....you know you wanna hit that. k, PEACE OUT SKANK!!!!

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