All you whiny bastards who can't get a clue
Well, I've got something to say to you
You're too lazy to work, you want me to pay your bills
While spend all your money on booze and cheap thrills
Then come crying to me when your ass ends up broke
If you think I'm a bank, you should watch what you smoke
get off of your ass, and get back in your place
but first and foremost, get outta my face
Now, I don't give a damn about the color of skin
but you think it makes you special, I think that's a sin
you act like I owe you something 'cause I'm white
you think that makes you better, I don't think it's right
you blame me for something my ancestors did
do you think yours were better? who are you trying to kid?
So I don't want to hear any bullshit about my race
so take your bigot attitude, and get outta my face
To you religious zealots, this I have to say
You wanna change the world? go back to church and pray
or open up a soup kitchen, and feed the hungry poor
but don't come knocking on my front door
I'm not going to convert, I like the faith I've got
so don't try to tell me that you're something that you're not
you've got your Bible, I've got a can of mace
we'll see who's faith is stronger if you don't get outta my face
Author notes
Written June 14th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- SHUT UP ALREADY! (Annoying Annoyers) by Cheesy Poof.
1000 points, ended June 28, 2005, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
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I do sometimes when i have time select a poem from the list on the right at random Today I stopped on yours .What a pleasure to step into your world for a while.
I love this poem,Kick ass funny and so true to life.I feel you may be preaching to the converted here,judging from the comments.I too join your happy band of This is my Life piss off. I love the final two lines they wrap up a great poem, Magic -
Finally something that actually made me laugh
Well done here, and those last two lines are just great
Can't say much more cause I'm still chuckling
Thanks for entering
crazy, are we not?
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More than the humour, I like the anger in this poem.
I don't think the flow is great, but the rhyming scheme is good - still, it was a very enjoyable read.
Well done my Egyptian friend.
Robin. -
A little dark humor is good for the soul. I've had a few funny rants in my time and probably will again.
I needed something to make me smile. It's nice to know your not alone
Den -
I ain't gonna mess wit you dude.
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LMAO,you are sooooo right And I completely agree.We pay taxes to buy convenient stores for the same guy who just bombed our ass.We pay for med.insurance for the mexicans famliles who dont speak english when I myself and my little girl dont have insurance.Errr.I get so mad.You have my applause .Great poem with a great meaning.
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you see where I am coming from. I had to fight for 2 years to get disability beacuse of my bad knee, but all these "minorities" seem to get welfare at the drop of a hat, just for being minorites.
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LOL,,,heck yeah, is that allowed??? This was funny and I can so relate to it. I love the dark humor probably most of all.
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well, ive had moochy neighbors, Minorities calling me racist because I i think white people should get the same treatment they feel entitled to, and Mormons trying to get me to join their church, so this is for all of them
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I couldn't agree more, I hate when people ask for handouts and complain about the 'white man' putting everyone down. I think the USA has to favor the black and spanish these days, they would get sued if they didn't. Think about, how many scholarships do see white kids getting just for being white? How about loans, financal aid, free education? None. White people are the ones being discriminated against now, even though 1 out of 6 people in the USA are now spanish... Hell, I say send all the illegal imagrants back to where ever they came from. I'd rather their childern not get a good education, they have a bad job, and they have bad houses then me. American jobs go to the imagrants before Americans? Thats BS...
I couldn't agree with this poem more.. I think white people need to stop being so affraid of being called a racist and just say whats on their mind. The tables have turned a bit, but it wasn't this generations fault.
Maybe I am a little racist, but I don't care about a person's skin untill it starts to effect me. And by that I mean, my kids getting into college and having to pay more for school because some black kid got a free ride because his parents laid a guilt trip on the American society. And so many of us wonder why tution is raising? -
i love this ppeice matter o fact i am gonna book mark it this peice is awsome and gets across a point.. i agree some one did push you too far. i like the rhyme this is a good poem to put a nice beat and rap it. very good write
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Hi, good one, wonder who has set you on fire? a good poem and a good tongue in cheek humour, all the best a little gem. this should do well in the comp, so I'll cross every thing that I can cross, all the best, Di
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Great poem .Don't think ihave quite the same views but this was a really good write and read .
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i like this because i really feel the anger. i know people can be triggered because of some of the things you mentioned so i like it cause i can relate. really good job .
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Really a good rant.
Whoa it sounds like someone pushed you too far, and hey Mace does backfire if you spray it against the wind. I understand the sentiment here but when a stranger comes to my door and I do have no trepassing sign they are not met with Mace. My dog is the one to ignore but I am not. No I do not feel that I owe anything to anyone that I don't owe myself but this is a good rant. I like rants.
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