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Not A Poem Just My Thoughts

Oh gosh!
i really cant take it
i mean he tells me one thing then he makes me think somthing different!
I just got into him and it is already screwed up!
He took the old memories away
And now he has out bad ones back into my mind!
He is so sweet!
and i know that if he really tries he can write a note from his heart!
But either he dosnt care or dosnt try!
i dont know anymore!
nothing ever works out for me!
NOTHING
   EVER
       EVER
           
    NEVER!           P    
i might as well give U
Beacause i really dont care!
I am sick and tired of it!
nobody wants me to be happy!
i just dont understand!
screw life
screw him
no wait dont screw him because i care
but i shouldnt!
i swear i would kill him if i could live without him


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my life sucks!!!! kill me now!
Written June 14th, 2005

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  • OcIceman
    June 18, 2005
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    oooooo lesbians yay


  • CountryLullaby
    June 17, 2005
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    thanks! i was really sad when i wrote this! but now im am coming to relize that it is better without him! he is a selfish butt licking douche eating prick! ok sorry about that! i had to get it off my chest! and it should beep(or bunny) it out!lol sorry if it didnt!lol but thanks for your comment! ~*CASEY*~


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    June 17, 2005
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    One day at a time. I laughed, but that was all I could do. This is not a sad poem. Well written thoughts. Beautiful!!!

  • CountryLullaby
    June 17, 2005
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    thank you so much! and i am always in the mood to meet new people! i will put you on my favorites list and hope to see you on!

  • dephormed-schoolman
    June 16, 2005
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    Great!!

    i like your poem. but just remember that there are always people out there like your friends anna and shelby who will never stop caring about you. but this is a great poem. keep writing. oh i would like to get to know you better too!

  • Sweet Summer Rose
    June 15, 2005
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    aww.. babe you are so funny.. but annas right we should go lesbian..(wait they all would prolly like that)!! maybe we should kill'em all!!!
    great poem


  • CountryLullaby
    June 15, 2005
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    haha thanks gurl! and if we did go lesbian i would so date you to!lol love ya! ~*CASEY*~

  • x PassionateKisses
    June 15, 2005
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    Casey baby - What's goin' on? I told you can talk to me about anything. And you still can - and Anna's right - guys are stupid! - They think they can get away with anything - until the day that they get hurt - they will never know how we feel - but it's all good - school will be over before you know it - and then you won't have to put up with anything - ya know? - I will c ya around - love you! - ♥ - Shelby

  • LifesStranger
    June 14, 2005
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    i love you!! i want you to be happy! i'm not really sure whats going on, but do i have to kill somebody? stupid boys...we should all go lesbian. i'd so date you..lol. hope things get better, love. peace!
    -Anna

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