Hate and anger, a thousand lies, guilt and pain, build up inside.
Everything now, I'll hold within,I'll keep quiet, until I give in.
I'll hide away, from everyone I know, I just wish, they would let me go.
I'll lie to everyone, tell them I'm fine, I wish they, would forget me this time.
No one should care, if I'm gone, because at this point, I want to be alone.
I'll hide in the dark, or just hide away, hide in my room, and stay there every day.
I'll lay in my bed, I'll try not to cry, I'll try not to think of you, and why I'm so deprived.
If anyone tries to visit me, or call me on my phone, I'll just tell my mom, to tell you I'm not home.
And if I feel like comming out, I'll be sure to let you know, because all I'm doin is pushin you away, from the pain that's startin to show.
Hate and anger, a thousand lies, guilt and pain, build up inside.
Everything now, I'll hold within,I'll keep quiet, until I give in.
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Written June 14th, 2005
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i guess you finally finished the one that you started to do in that IM.
interesting... sad... seems rather truthful after talking to you.
i hope you feel better, demonchild13.
becca -
wow. i loved this poem.....not only was it awesome....everything about it, but the way it flowed made it even more perfect....i loved the ending.....just made me go wow....lol....ya well, you did awesome....keep up the good work and cant wait to read another poem of yours!!!
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i loved this one so much!
you can really feel how much pain is in this, its just awesome. I really liked how you said:
"Hate and anger, a thousand lies, guilt and pain, build up inside.
Everything now, I'll hold within,I'll keep quiet, until I give in."
and used it in the beginning and at the end of the poem. I loved this!
keep it up, and i hope all goes well! 
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great poem
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Like this poem
like it and you did expressed ur feelings very well in the poem -
i didnt try with this poem... but no offence taken.
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OMG i got the gay vibe from this soz if im way out buy friend jack on this site i u want me to give hime ur details so u can chat and hell help u out but this is relly cool and i like it but its structure is hard to read so u might wanna think bout using a different structure next time u write a poem like this well odne anyway and hope all goes well sorry if u dont like my comments or u take offence to them
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