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My Black Rose,

My Black Rose,
I’ll hold you tight,
Never to lose,
My crimson sight,

I love you more,
Then my own life,
Don’t drift away,
Put down that knife,

My Black Rose,
I’ve loved you so,
Breaking away,
Yes or no,

Stay with me now,
Rest your heart,
I love you more,
When were apart,

My black Rose,
Hold on tight,
I’ll never lose you,
From my sight,

Please don’t go,
It’ll hurt me more,
You know I love you,
You know I’m the cure,

My Black Rose,
I’ve loved and lost,
To find you here,
It’s not a cost,

Love me now,
How I love you,
Stay with me,
You know its true,

My Black Rose,
I long for you,
Hold me tight,
If only it were true,

Hope you find,
What you’re looking for,
I know I will,
You’re my cure,

My Black Rose,
Your thorns are sharp,
pricking my finger,
I wish only you…

For you,
Forever will be,
My one and only,
Flower of darkness…

My Black Rose…

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Written June 14th, 2005

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  • Queen of Wicka
    June 14, 2005
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    THis is really good and I feel the same way. Who are you?