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Dream Kiss

Lying in bed
Your arms around me
Feeling safe
Just like your love makes me feel
I Close my eyes
Turn to face you
I feel your lips touch mine
I open my eyes to see you
Only to Realize your not there
It was just a dream
I stare at the wall
Wishing my dream would turn Reality
Knowing it will soon
Keeps me dreaming
I close my eyes
For another Dream kiss

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Just A Dream Kiss?
Written June 13th, 2005

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  • astralshepherd gold member
    June 27, 2005
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    very simple and clean, no wasted line or words, brilliant in that i found it so engaging and compelling…but then, love, true love is just that…engaging and compelling. Blessings to the both of you, may your love continue to grow and blossom and all best wishes, ~richard