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true friends

trapped in a ride of my dreams
an emotional roller coaster has me it seems
the up and downs show my life
with all the good things and all the fights
once in awhile ill loop-da-loop
and then ill be thrown back with my little group
of people i talk to but i don't like
and people that pretend that it is everyone they unlike
sick of being here with them
i wish i could find some real true friends

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so sick of everyone being fake and pretending that their life is much better when its not
Written June 13th, 2005

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  • CrazyWalnut09
    August 10, 2005
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    relateable

    I like to kick those people in the faces(literally!)...It's fun, you should try it sometime... I know what you're saying..... I've been stabbed in the back so many times....grrrr....


  • Forevers Eve9
    July 14, 2005
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    Loved it

    I really like this poem man I wish I could find some real friends too. Cause now I don`t have anyone but Damn This poem is amazing. I think it`s one of your best. I love this poem keep up the good work.
    Olivia


  • rower4life
    June 22, 2005
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    damn chicka... this is actually amazing!! its not written as a bitchy piece of getting mad at everyone ish... but more as a subtle hint!! i think everyones always looking for someone that they can call their real, true friends! i used to have a group of friends like that... id only be around them so that i didnt look like the kid who didnt have any friends.. but deep inside, i knew that i didnt like them and that i wanted nothing to do with them!!! "once in awhile ill loop-da-loop
    and then ill be thrown back with my little group"
    my absolute fav lines in the entire poem.... said so much with so little effort!! I LOVED IT!!!!!

  • sunbeam
    June 20, 2005
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    i love this keep up the good work


  • Shawnnessy
    June 15, 2005
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    oh my gosh.. that is my story.. my life. wow i love it. i had a group just like that. and u couldnt trust ne of them. and deep inside u know u hate them u hate them with every drop of blood flowing in ur body. and u really wouldnt care if they were dropped in to a pit of burning hot flames. u would just sit there and watch them burn. i mean u cant trust ne of them. especially when ur bi. u tell one and they tell the whole school. and u become the laughing stock of the jr high. ppl u dont even know, know that ur bi. and belittle u becuz of it. i hate ppl. and i totaly love ur poem. i mean it is magnificent. it fits me to a tee.

  • Rejected Romantic
    June 14, 2005
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    I can really relate to what you have to say and I completely understand. I have to fake alot of things too sometimes just to make other people feel better and act like it's all okay. Great write and great expression hun


  • shouri13
    June 14, 2005
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    hey arent i one of youre true friends... if this is true you suck cause you know damn well i'm not like that so w/e sorry for sounding like i have an addituse and all but its how i feel sha i'll ttyl

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