Why do you let her treat you like that
i know you love her, but look at the way she acts with that other guy
I can treat you better than she can, because i truly love you
So many hints given to you
but you still don't know how i really feel
The looks i give to make you understand that i'm worth it
You deserve so much better but you don't see it
i really love you and i can give you so much more
PLEASE let her go
Why don't you see me for a change
You talk about her but you don't know what your saying
I know your blind from her love
So sorry if you can't except the way i feel
Just think about what i say
i truly love you
Author notes
This non-rhyming poem is about 2 guys!!! i took how i felt about both of them and put it in one poem!!!
Written June 13th, 2005
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Okay colette this isn't what u think it is!!! LOL there's this boy in my school that i like and his girl is basiclly playin him, and the other part to it is that another boy i like still likes his ex-girl and all he dose is talk about her!!!! so i added my feeling toward both of them and their problems into 1 poem!!! So do u get it???? LOL
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aw... kiara i see you've gotten yourself in a little triangle lol. 2 guys and only one you lol, i'll be the second you if you want me too...yeah right theres never gonna be another kiara that i meer thats just like you. youre an amazing poet and i love you for it
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good job kiara... This poem is really good man keep up the good work and quick question who are these 2 boys??? -
this is a good poem.........is love the only thing going on in your life?!?!?! lol.........GOD your depressing me, lol. but this si a very lovly poem. and its great
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