You say you don't care
but what did i do wrong
My love for you is unfair
and ive waited for you too long
Your running out of hours
but they go so fast
It seems like days
and the pain slowly devours
It seems like you don't care
about my feelings or emotions
To you it's just a flair
but i look at you with strong devotion
Author notes
Um idk what this is really about!!! i just have so much pain from past things so i write about them and idk where it comes from!!!
Written June 6th, 2005
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great
thats good it remindes me of a guy troy i thought i liked but am realized i never really did. I waited for him for four years. Now he has someone else AND I JUST dont care why would you say you hate it? I love it -
This was great! I can relate to it! The first part was great!! A well written piece!
Brilliant job! -
i like how it rhymed...I can't rhyme too well. Why did u say u hate this poem? I liked it, but it seems to stop short...I think you should continue. I like the last part best.
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I really like this poem. I LOVE the first stanza, lol. I had fun reading this, and you did a really good job, keep it up!
Courtney
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