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Dream The Distance


We're sleeping through all our heartaches, alone under different city lights. Orange, just like the pills. I'd give anything to keep you close like a dream, but the medication makes my head spins. I can't focus on anything or anyone anymore. I'm away from everything I used to be and love, and maybe, it's just a way to feel closer to you in the distance. Keep your eyes close, so we can keep contact. Hold your breath and keep me in mind. At best, these words will help you to sleep and never wake up.

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Written June 13th, 2005

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  • Exploit Stereotypes
    May 22, 2006
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    It kinda reminded me of the Love Song by the Cure. But anyways i liked it. Depressing in the best kinda ways


  • kid smoke
    June 27, 2005
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    Nice

    I dig it. Medicated Romance is my kinda thing.


  • shotlike life
    June 14, 2005
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    gosh
    this is so damn beautiful
    i guess the pills are like
    what you make of them
    and that's pretty

    my favorite part is "Hold your breath and keep me in mind"

    really excellent
    -gwen


  • live-death
    June 13, 2005
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    short, but pretty cute