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Been Here All Along

You are so blind
But by what I don’t know

What makes it so you cant see
Why don’t you simply look at me

You tell me you love to flirt with me
But do not see a relationship happening

Blinded by lust
Not able to see I want more

Although we do flirt a lot
During English class the most though

You sit in the floor with me beside you
Your hands holding me in close

We always talk about what we want to do
How we are going to go party, just me and you

Even though we have all this
This is apparently all you want

But what about what I want
How about what I need

I just hope you start to see
What is standing in front of you

Something that has been there all along
But its to bad for you that you couldn’t see

Author notes

I dont know anymore!!..F U C K I N G shoot me!!!
Written June 13th, 2005

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  • dephormed-schoolman
    June 19, 2005
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    great.

    great poem. i like it. ive had someone seem through me so i know how that is. your a great poet keep writing.


  • CountryLullaby
    June 17, 2005
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    yea maybe we should do that! i hope somthing changes soon! Before i die!lol thanks for commenting! ~*CASEY*~


  • tboppa
    June 17, 2005
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    Oh so true...

    Hi,
    Well this is very close to one of my written thoughts. maybe if we gave them a good shaking they might wake up and see us. Good write, keep it up.

  • CountryLullaby
    June 16, 2005
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    awww! thanks! that is the sweetest thing i have heard all month!lol yea i know guys can be pricks somtimes! but im sure your not! thankx for commenting! glad you liked it! ~*CASEY*~


  • Chad Lough
    June 15, 2005
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    Guys are retarded bastards... I am the exception... Just kidding, there are some decent guys left. I like this poem. Thank you for commenting on mine.

    Chadrick

  • LifesStranger
    June 13, 2005
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    i'm sorry love. i know how it is. slap him in the face and say "look, bitch" lol. the poem rocked, though. i love two lines together that don't rhyme. crazy me!
    peace and love!!

    anna

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