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First Night

I was his and he was mine
Even if it was just for those few moments in time.
I knew when we awoke
He wouldn't be mine.
I wouldn't be his.
But for those few moments
We were each others.
I'll never let go of that feeling
I'll never forget.

The way i felt in your arms
Safe,Secure, and Sleeping
The way you felt in mine
The rhythm of his breathe
His head upon my breast
His arms curled around my waist
I didn't want to let you go

A dream
A fantasy
That did come true
This is because of him
I can't count how many times
A dream has been made reality
Because if him
Just many have come true
I never want to let him go
And he still isn't even mine

A memory cherished from this point on
Will be the First Night
I spent in your arms.

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*sigh*
Written June 13th, 2005

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  • SoPunkItHurts
    November 22, 2005
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    how sad beautifully written! well done

  • Virety Enten
    September 21, 2005
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    I love this poem. I wish I could write like you.

  • AngryPrincess2
    June 13, 2005
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    It was. Cuz it wasn't anything really sexual at all. Just genuine caring and how it feels like to be in that persons arms.

  • Schiska
    June 13, 2005
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    I really like this poem. It seems so innocent. I don't know if that's what your were going for, but that's just how it came across to me and I really liked. Good job.