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Time To Just Soar

All I do is ignore
Don't want to give a damn!
I'm not going to stop
For now probably just going to soar...

Today my head is a mess
A new boy in my chest
What was wrong, I did
Just wrong in my own head
I've ignored my own promises
Stepped my lines I had spread
My limits my rules
All down one drain
I'm I happy?
It's just a little rain...
I was then...
Then the sky was the limit!
I was happy!
I'm still happy!
No regrets I must admit!
Just worries...
Of what "they" will think...
ARGH!!! STOP!!!
I HATE THIS ME!
What happened to my optimism?
The girl that didn't give a damn?!
Didn't care what others thought?!

                                         "Hello, I'm still here
                                         Deep inside
                                         Ignore this confused girl
                                         Time! She needs time!
                                         Just to think and relax
                                         Tomorrow is a new day
                                         She'll be back
                                         Happy and optimistic
                                         Living life
                                         No worries and just...
                                         Keep on walking her path."

Author notes

It seems i only get involved with impossible relationships... WHY?! He'll be gone in 2 months... what if i fall in love? damn where has gone all my opthimism?!
Written June 13th, 2005

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  • Serj
    July 17, 2005
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    f#cking good poem


  • Thayla
    July 2, 2005
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    Take the advice you gave yourself. Love is hard thats no joke, but remember life has no guarantees so love as often as you possible can. I too have the problem of attracting impossible love, but at least I have loved. Don't be so hard on yourself, life is hard enough. And always remember life may get you down but your only living when you keep getting up!!!