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"Brandon"

Every night and every day,
I think of you,
Your gone when i sleep,
Your never there when i eat,
You were my every thing.
But when that day came,
I missed you so,
Deep down i was thinking baby please don't go!
I love you for who you are not what you do,
Sometimes i forget the world because baby i love you.
When you were gone we two both grew apart.
But when you left you really broke my heart,
Now your back i don't know what to say,
since you been gone our feeling broke a way.
if only i could have time to tell you how i feel,
then you would know this bunny is for real.
A simple phone call will never be enough,
you will never understand that this is tuff...

Author notes

This is a relationship sort of a poem...
Written June 13th, 2005

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